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PostSubject: totodile and riolu's adventure chapter 1   Sun Feb 28, 2010 1:36 am

Chapter 1: the start!

- one day a wild riolu was practicing his aura sphere attack when suddenly..........

Riolu: riiiiiiiioollllllu

Author: sorry about that readers if i just fiddle with the translator program on my computer then.....

- the author did so

Author: enjoy the rest of story readers

Riolu: what happened

- suddenly a wild totodile appeared

Totodile: hi

Riolu: hi

Totodile: i saw those aura spheres earlier, where are you from

Riolu: such information is classified to the likes of you

Totodile: really?, or do ya want an ice beam to go straight for ya face

Riolu: you wouldn't

Totodile: yea i would

Riolu: try it and i'll call the the NSPCP

Totodile: the what now?

Riolu: the National Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Pokemon, either that or i'll call Pokeline, so what are ya gonna do about it

Totodile: fine i'll just fire it at the bushes over there for training

- totodile fires an ice beam at the bushes, suddenly a murkrow appears and fires a shadow ball, riolu then fires an aura sphere at murkrow in which the murkrow uses steel wing to deflect it at the sky where.......

Author: crap! an aura sphere, how can i deflect it

- meanwhile the aura sphere destroys the laptop

Author: noooooooooooooooooo! my translation program, right that's it i'm gonna get that riolu

- the author left to get a new translation program, and a new laptop for that matter

Riolu: riolu RIOLU!

- meanwhile a computer wizard came by and fixed the program

Author: that was quick thanks

CPU wiz: thanks what happened to it

Author: well an aura sphere destroyed it

CPU wiz: uuuuhh ok then, call me if it gets destroyed again ok

Author: ok

- both of them left meanwhile

Murkrow: time do die

Totodile: o really, riolu wanna tag team with me

Riolu: ok then formation, i use aura sphere then you use ice beam it can't fail

Totodile: ok then

- the long fight began, riolu uses aura sphere, murkrow uses drill peck to destroy it, then totodile uses ice beam in which murkrow dodges then in a desperate attempt, riolu and totodile repeatedly fired their attacks and eventually murkrow was unable to dodge and eventually fainted

R and T: yay we won

Murkrow: don't get too excited i will get my revenge on ya, actually just you wait, you'll see

- the murkrow left

Riolu: well at least he's gone, wait what's that

- riolu and totodile found an everstone each

Totodile: hmmmm so what do these do

Riolu: i don't know but hey we beat a murkrow

Totodile: yea, maybe we'll have more adventures

Riolu: probably

----------------chapter ends-------------------
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PostSubject: Re: totodile and riolu's adventure chapter 1   Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:54 am

Nice Fanfic!


Credit to Venu for the awesome sig.
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PostSubject: Re: totodile and riolu's adventure chapter 1   Sun Feb 28, 2010 11:46 am

nice Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: totodile and riolu's adventure chapter 1   Sun Feb 28, 2010 3:26 pm

Cool and Nice

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